Channel: Write to the Top

Category: Education

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Description: Scoring for the IELTS and TOEFL writing sections is different in many ways. However, what is similar to both is the fact that good writing requires certain elements including strong grammar and vocabulary, answering the questions and developing an argument, good organization and logical flow. In this video, we look at a student essay sample and give it a score for the IELTS academic or the TOEFL. See where this essay lost points and why. You can also see a full edit of this essay as well as a rewrite. To see the essays on a bigger screen, follow this link: writetotop.com/ielts-toefl-essay-topic-computer-games Here you can see the original essay, the edits, the TOEFL rewrite (411 words) and the IELTS rewrite (329 words). Don’t forget to visit writetotop.com for more of our original content. See our Idea Banks (full of useful vocab): bit.ly/2RIhBjz Would you like to help make Write to the Top even better? Support us: writetotop.com/product/support-us paypal.me/writetotop