Channel: Write to the Top

Category: Education

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Description: Two very important parts of the writing score for the essay are the Task Response and Cohesion & Coherence criteria. These criteria look at the ideas presented and how well linked they are, how they flow, how they present and support a thesis, and so on. In this video we look at a type of task that people find difficult because of the ideas involved. The task is this: In the past, people trusted what they saw in photographs. Nowadays, because of technology, it is hard to trust the reality seen in photos. Do you think this is a negative or positive development? We will work through reading the task, brainstorming ideas, and writing two versions of the essay to see two approaches to the body paragraphs. You can read the essays here: bit.ly/3e7VDxU Don’t forget to visit writetotop.com for more of our original content. See our Idea Banks (full of useful vocab): writetotop.com/books Want more reading and writing practice? Join our Facebook group: facebook.com/groups/AdamsRWL Would you like to help make Write to the Top even better? Support us: writetotop.com/product/support-us paypal.me/writetotop